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Relaxed

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Just something quick and fun. Testing more of a painted look.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Alright, let's get started.
I'm going to start off with the eevee.
The eevee doesn't look at all really relaxed, more of calm, for more of a relaxed type of position, you should make her lying down, or leaning against the tree there. Now for anatomy, there are some errors, eevee's have muzzle's, so you might want to make more depth into it, the ears look okay, but the inner ear looks..uneven, try, next time, adding some fluff around the inner ear to make it look more realistic and even. The head looks too round, try making it less round. The chest doesn't cover up the shoulders/neck, it's poofy, but it's still on the chest, try to only put the fluffyness on the chest, then you can show the shoulders more easily. The scarf should have a knot in the back, and if it is big, it should hang out more. The tail is a little too poofy and it doesn't look good, since it distracts me from the picture a lot, try making it thinner, but you can still make it look fluffy by adding hairline when you are outlining the sketch. The eye doesn't seem to be looking at the comet, next time make sure it does. The shading looks realistic, good job on that. But I feel as though you can make more of an impact by using more colors, such as dark blue, gree, light blue, black, white. Now, since it is nighttime, the shading should be more dark on the back, tail, back of head, ears and belly, legs and chest, but it should have some light highlights on the places where the comet's light shines.

Now for the background.
The grass is alright, but maybe next time you should try adding more blades of grass of different shades of green, and making them wavy in the wind. Now there is no shadow beneath the eevee, next time, since the comet's light is at the front side of the eevee, the shadow should extend backwards, behind the eevee. Tree's curve, don't worry about that, I've seen plenty of tree's curve. xD But try adding darker and lighter shades of brown, and try adding little bark effects to make it more realistic. The sky should be darker, a lot darker. The stars are wayyy too big, every once in a wided space you can have stars like that, but it should be discouraged, next time, try adding more stars, but have the brush size to something way smaller, the comet is good, maybe you can add blue or red to it.

Overall this picture isn't bad at all. Just some details and stuff need to be fixed ^^